Some people think that shops should not be allowed to sell food or drink that has been scientifically proved to be bad for people’ health
Do you agree or disagree?
Opinions are divided on whether the sale of unhealthy food should be prohibited in shops or not. I believe than the ban on this type of food could potentially do more harm than good.
Advocates of the prohibition may argue that health problems such as obesity and diabetes, which are comparatively hard to be treated, emanate from unhealthy food, As a matter of fact, they have got a point about this, there is an alarming rate of people contracting incurable diseases due to the consumption of processed food and sparkling drinks. Many people keep purchasing and consuming these harmful products o...
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