An interesting place I have been to
The summer of 2019, when I am having dinner with my family. My older brother advised us that “we should have the trip to throw the stress on this year”. He said that because we only have a few days so we only have the short trip so “Vinh Hy bay” is the destination. The first time I heard that I wondered where it belonged and I thought our trip would be boring. But when I put my feet into this place I realize there is the most beautiful bay I have ever seen.
The first impression is the scenery and the atmosphere.Beside that Vinh Hy Bay is a small bay in Vinh Hai Commune, Ninh Hai District, Ninh Thuan Province, Vietnam.Located in northeast of Ninh Thuan province, 42 km from Phan Rang city, the bay has three sides include East, West, North and is surrounded by mountains and beach in the south. Vinh Hy Bay is not very commercialized. As a side effect, this place retains a wild and majestic beauty that few other places have. On the other hand, the sea is adjacent to Nui Chua National Park, and the three sides are encircled by huge mountains and forests.
We stay relaxing and comfortable in a large hotel near the ocean, but it is even more interesting to explore a pristine beach that is not overcrowded. The crystal clear water that reflects the sky and sunlight, the endless sandbank that gives our feet a smooth feeling, and the green range of coconut trees that provides a very poetic and romantic setting. We spent the day together going to see the most beautiful places. We experienced squid fishing with local people, going to traditional markets and buying souvenirs. We had dinner together by the beach. Enjoying the sea breeze and the typical dishes here, sharing the story of our experience over the past year have brought us a comfortable and meaningful evening.
After the trip, I realized that my country still has so many wonderful places. Beaches are always the best places to be, and Vinh Hy bay vacation can help us regain energy and provide us with an unforgettable experience. If I have the opportunity to come back, I will spend more time enjoying it.
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... We experienced squid fishing with local people, going to traditional markets and...
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...aditional markets and buying souvenirs. We had dinner together by the beach. Enjoy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 6.8 265% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.15609756098 412% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 5.60731707317 803% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 965.302439024 180% => OK
No of words: 377.0 196.424390244 192% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61538461538 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 3.73543355544 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59638478805 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 106.607317073 200% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564986737401 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 283.868780488 183% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7115998258 43.030603864 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9444444444 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17320619388 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507559660423 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617220807978 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993128368937 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407607497856 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 40.7170731707 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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