Write a narrative essay about an interesting place (village/city...) you have been to.
In summer three years ago, my family and I had a vacation in Da Lat for a change of cool atmosphere. A trip to a completely new place for me and it is a paradise for tourists.
Instead of flying, we chose to go by car to enjoy the scenery along the way. Da Lat is a foggy city, so everything was covered in a thick layer of fog when we got there early in the morning. After checking in at the hotel, we spent time visiting Bao Dai Palace - a very famous architectural work that visitors should not miss when coming to Da Lat. This is where King Bao Dai - the last king of the Nguyen Dynasty spent part of his life with his family. It is built in classic European style with fine details. In the afternoon, we visit Dalat Flower Garden, which gathers a variety of beautiful flowers from all over the world. We took some pictures there, and I heard that this place will be even more beautiful during the Flower Festival. In the evening, we go to the night market to enjoy some typical dishes of Da Lat and enjoy the fresh air. On the next day, we went to Langbiang mountain, we also visited many different places such as Tea hill, love valley, etc.
Ended the trip by walking around the city with a view. the roads, the pine hills, the slopes for the last time. Three days is not enough to explore Da Lat, it makes me feel regretful because the time to come here is so short, and I am sure that I will come back here on a near occasion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... me and it is a paradise for tourists. Instead of flying, we chose to go by car...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... to Langbiang mountain, we also visited many different places such as Tea hill, love valley, e...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aces such as Tea hill, love valley, etc. Ended the trip by walking around the cit...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...by walking around the city with a view. the roads, the pine hills, the slopes for t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.14336917563 5.12529762239 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18634549761 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609318996416 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8703868282 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5714285714 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 7.06120827912 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0314664067409 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0125889117284 0.084324248473 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0205338433735 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0232551758599 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00360632221993 0.056905535591 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.73 12.4159519038 54% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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