Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying.
Students often end up ruminating over the major they want to persue and take almost about an year to decide, after starting university. The prompt suggests that universities should require students to take cources only within the fields they are interested in. I disagree with the assertion made in the claim due to the following three reasons.
Firstly, not all cources taught in university are professional majors. Therefore, limiting the curriculum of any courses on one common criteria is not a great idea. For example, in University of Maryland there are two categories of majors, the arts and music, whereas the others are technical and management majors. Though, most of the students admitted to a technical or management course are observed to prefer persuing subjects that align completely with their fields. On the other hand, students who persue arts and music tend to opt the cources from diverse fields such as computer graphics, as most of the students find it interesting and helpfull for their careers. Hence, limiting students to choose courses only make them unable to pursue their true interests and most people often tend to have mutiple interests. These people look forward to their university years to learn such subjects or skills, which should be taken away from them.
Further, it has been observed that due to the ever changing market, it has become a necessaty to learn mutiple type of sujects and skills to stand out of the crowd. For instance, in medical profession, artificial intelligence has spread so quickly that most of the medical staff is strugulling to learn the technicalities of operating such complex machines every day. Therefore, students should be provided the facility to opt some of the courses on their own( 70 to 80 percent of courses can be fixed by the university and rest 30 percent courses can be kept as optional). This will help students develop, as overall professionals and excel in their fields using such self-opted courses, making it a beneficial academic strategy.
Furthermore, most of the times students join university, not completely sure about what they actually want to do with their lives, Therefore, it is necessary to provide them a chance to beat around the bush and learn by themseleves, their area of interest. A survey conducted by the Student Association of Delhi, talked to 5000 students from universities all around India, about why they selcted the course that they are currently persuing. The survey has published the results stating that around 70 percent students answered that, they opted the course they are persuing because either their firends were persuing the same course or either their teachers or parents motivated them to. This survey highlight an important trend, that students usually do not know what they actually want to persue and in such scenario limiting their exlopring capacity by tying them to a rigid default course structure will further prevent them from discovering their true interests.
Although, some may argue that students do no have a lot of time during their university years to persue mutiple unrelated courses at the same time. But, universities today have developed various methods to provide students with a chance to enhance their skills in different fields altogether through Bootcamps and seminars held periodically. Where, it is optional for students to attend them any number of days feasible. Also, lots of online courses have been introduced by universities for any additional or optional subjects; saving time and effort to attend classes everyday. Therefore , students need to be given a chance to decide on their own, which subjects they are actually interested in and choose accordingly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ey want to persue and take almost about an year to decide, after starting universi...
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Line 5, column 428, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... should be provided the facility to opt some of the courses on their own 70 to 80 percent o...
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Line 7, column 700, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'highlights'.
Suggestion: highlights
... parents motivated them to. This survey highlight an important trend, that students usual...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...om discovering their true interests. Although, some may argue that students do no hav...
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Line 9, column 570, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...aving time and effort to attend classes everyday. Therefore , students need to be given ...
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Line 9, column 589, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rt to attend classes everyday. Therefore , students need to be given a chance to d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, of course, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 88.0 58.6224719101 150% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3122.0 2235.4752809 140% => OK
No of words: 602.0 442.535393258 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18604651163 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95335121839 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68441450928 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 297.0 215.323595506 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493355481728 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 956.7 704.065955056 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.884108645 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.739130435 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1739130435 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52173913043 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326918341457 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103551188347 0.0831039109588 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115184664253 0.0758088955206 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207618073095 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860402531587 0.0667264976115 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 100.480337079 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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