Individuals can do nothing to change society. Any new developments can only be brought about by government and large institutions. How far do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that it is almost impossible for people to change the community since any innovations will be neglected unless they are brought by the administration or academies. However, in my opinion, they can only be developed with the help of the citizens.
In the first place, it can be denied that government and organizations are making a great contribution to change society positively. For example, SOS Children’s Village is one of the largest non-governmental organizations in the world, which is established to bring care and happiness as a family to orphans, and street children. Even though they have responsibilities for supporting individuals, people receiving help are vitally responsible for making use of this opportunity to improve their life.
On the other hand, there is a close relationship between society and people. The public cannot exist independently without humans therefore, societal changes are not necessarily to be breakthroughs that tremendously influence the whole world. Even a gesture action towards a positive life is considered as a shift. Each person undertakes those changes in their daily life, which in summary, will be a big development that can make the community better. For instance, people can volunteer to teach children living in poor areas, not only subjects including Maths, Foreign language, or Literature, but also soft skills.
In conclusion, I do not think the government or people alone can bring impacts and create advances to the world. Nevertheless, if there is a partnership among them, any revolutions will be much more beneficial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in summary, in my opinion, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37051792829 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23873753226 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629482071713 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9684901642 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8333333333 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227584510503 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822678491868 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671747036056 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142553612483 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401998712802 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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