Many people use distance-learning programs (study materials, the internet, and so on) to study at home, but some think that it cannot bring the same benefits of attending school, college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In this day and age, an increasing number of people are concerned about whether online learning, with the aid of several programs, brings about the same advantages as does attending schools or tertiary institutions or not. I completely disagree with this idea since I believe receiving distance education has more drawbacks far outweighing its seeming benefits.
First, it goes without saying that students have to undergo radical changes in sharp contrast with the conventional way of studying. In other words, it is the distractions and inconveniences, such as technical issues or disturbing notifications from technology gadgets, that could act as a hindrance to students' productivity. As a consequence, this would lead to the downgrading of knowledge acquirement. According to a recent survey taken place in the University of Oxford, online lectures are not attended as actively and enthusiastically as their offline counterparts. In addition, it is undeniable that online education somewhat causes detriments to pupils' wholesomeness. In particular, distance learning possibly results in some physical ailments such as eyestrain or postural syndromes, thus negatively affecting students' mental wellness.
That is not to say that studying using new methods, such as through the Internet or joining online courses, would not be beneficial. Students, of course, do not have to pay the expensive textbook fees that is beneficial for students with difficult circumstances. Moreover, students can save the commuting expenses and time, especially if they come from the countryside. Nevertheless, this only serves its purpose only when pupils maintain good self-discipline, which is not variably the case for all individuals.
In conclusion, I would argue that it would be better off going back to the conventional but highly efficient educational approach as long as online education is still a way off before being able to prove its worth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, of course, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55743243243 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25472173439 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64527027027 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3146391523 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.538461538 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143644465347 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432683363659 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415665933646 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772022165609 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563815007339 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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