Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?
Due to the rush actions of individuals, our planet Earth is under threat. However, this problem can be addressed through government`s tight regulation and awareness of people. This essay will discuss some harmful activities for the nature and will come up with solutions to solve or alleviate this problem.
There are various environmental problems. First of all, climate change which is the acute problem of our society is the result of reckless human action. In other words, because of overpopulation people are in dire need of highly lucrative factories that can provide food to the population. In turn, the factories release carbon dioxide, which depletes the ozone layer of the earth and promotes global warming. It is well known fact that an increase in global average temperature causes numerous problems as megafire, deforestation, biodiversity deterioration therefore, this issue should be tackled. Besides, plastic prolusion is another problem. By the way of explanation, all plastic that produced for human needs are not degradable, hence excessive use of plastic causes plastic pollution which involves the accumulation of plastic products and microplastics in the environment that adversely affects wildlife, marine life or human. For example, it has been estimated that over 400,000 marine mammals perish annually due to plastic pollution in oceans.
Turning to the possible solutions, government should launch carbon tax. To make it clearly, a carbon tax is a government fee imposed on companies that burn coal, oil, or gas. As an example, taxes are in use around the world, in places including China and some U.S. states, not least California which cover 21 percent of global greenhouse gas emissions. Moreover, it is one’s duty to take care of planet. Thus, in order to reduce plastic use people can use bio-plastic which is biodegradable, sustainable and absolutely safe for our environment. For instance, scientists said that bio-plastic from avocado seeds the best alternative to ordinary plastic.
In conclusion, as far as environmental problems are concerned with implementing some solutions for each problem by both government and people could prevent large-scale destruction of the environment and save humankind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...s including China and some U.S. states, not least California which cover 21 percent of gl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, by the way, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50289017341 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04321399044 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609826589595 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5126204054 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.777777778 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61111111111 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183308782564 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512337751441 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048189696309 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11561202206 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200310462127 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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