Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
The prompt says that youth usually enjoys life more than the elderly. In my opinion, that statement isn't true for many reasons.
To feel happy and enjoy life depends on how that one thinks and feels. Therefore, happiness and enjoying life are mainly related to the personality itself, not age.
To begin, if someone suffers a specific disease, which prevents him from enjoying his life properly. It doesn't matter how old is he, doesn't it? If that person is young or old, he will not find the comfort to enjoy his life. However, if that one is old, but he is interested in doing sports and playing tennis or football, of course, he will be healthier and happier than that young one who is smoking with respiratory disease.
Furthermore, success is a key to enjoying life and happiness. If a young man doesn't achieve any accomplishment and never tastes the success, How does he like his life and enjoy it? The answer is never to feel that feeling. On the other hand, if we look at the Kentucky restaurants series, we will find that the most successful restaurant in the world belonged to an old man who started his project while he was 60. Therefore, age is not related to the way we enjoy our lives. When Kentucky's owner started his project, no one believed him to be one day such famous. Such success would bring him happiness and thus life's enjoyment.
Furthermore, most renowned people in business worldwide are elderly, which illustrates that people enjoy their lives and can achieve accomplishments. For instance, Elon Musk, the famous businessman who invented the auto-drive car. One day I listened to that person in an interview; he talked about how he is enjoying his life by reaching every day a new dream that he has been dreaming of for years. Thus, happiness is not for a specific age.
Therefore, whether the one is young or old, it is not germane to how one feels and enjoys life. To feel happy and be amused by life depends on the internal construing to the meaning of life and what we should do to feel that life's happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, of course, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65564738292 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55984388872 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504132231405 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3597224512 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4761904762 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.80952380952 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276772531688 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849113234317 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759293981311 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151576074442 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280159216392 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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