The graph below gives information about the percentage of people living in Australia who were born in Asia, the UK, and other regions.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of Australian citizens who were born in Asia, the UK, and other regions from 1976 to 2011.
Overall, the proportion of Asian people and other regions lived in Australia, which rose gradually while the Britans decrease and there was a downward then rose up in total.
First of all, the Uk people lived in Australia took up nearly 15% in 1976 before declining dramatically to 5% in 2011. Similarly, there was a decrease on the percentage of Other religion people who stayed in Australia from 11% in 1976 to 7% in 1986. However, this figure witnessed a huge change which it increased rapidly to 14.5% in 2006, but it decreased slightly to 13% in the next 5 years.
On the other hand, the figure for Asian population who lived in Australia became the highest percentage after rising significantly over 35 years, which from 3% up to 15%.
Lastly, The total made up 23% in 1976 and there was a rapid decline in this figure to nearly 20% in 25 years later then it increased and reached the peak with 25% in 2011.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'later than'?
Suggestion: later than
...n this figure to nearly 20% in 25 years later then it increased and reached the peak with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, lastly, similarly, then, while, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60638297872 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51640160714 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547872340426 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.1891385346 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 123.714285714 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5714285714 5.23603664747 240% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299386621884 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151161872627 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123919091889 0.0843802449381 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178831669592 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126138911124 0.0819641961636 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.