Many people often put their personal and private information online (credit card number, address) for banking, shopping, ....Do you think it is positive or negative development?
For the past few years,increasing rate of technology affects almost every aspects of life;in fact, most of the people prefer to share their personal information online like address,phone number in order to sing up for social media or online banking. although, it can be beneficial for avoiding go out, cyber crime and misuse of information may possible as a negative point of put personal data online ; each should be addressed saperatly. there are few points , which can be advantageous for people who put their private data online. To begin with , most of the people ,nowadays, do noy like to go outside even for their bank work. To put it simply, with help of the online network and online site people can put their address and telephone number and just a tough of a finger, their all bankig work can be done. for example , when someone start online banking ,he or she just have to put their information and within a minite he or she can credit their money and debit as well. As a result it can be very convinient way for people . However, over the advantage , there are some disadvantage also come when one put personal data online. To start with , people can face major issues like cyber ceime. Means , if one share information online , hackers can hack their data and they can leak . Consequentaly, people have to face some problems and it can distroy individuals life . Another reason is that some people may imsuse others information . To conclude, although there are few positive points of online sharing ,some mojor issues such as cyber crime and misuse of data can be disadvantageous for public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, well, for example, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63117192834 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538181818182 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4101819722 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.538461538 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317733969411 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121423395305 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621172871444 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317733969411 0.151304729494 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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