The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

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The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Submitted by irenejung on Sat, 10/02/2021 - 09:09

world is very big area where trillion of living beings can survive. people cannot monitor these big area at once so they needs different kinds of technology and idea to keep scrutinize and know the information every corners of the globe.
in my opinion there is collosal amount of demerits we have to confront if there is only one government who has athorities to do work on the development of the world. Eventhough world is divided into many continents moreover continents have further go on division and name as different countries, those countries are not full yfledged . we all knew there is no one contitents is fulley developed because of lack of attaintion of the people. we can take the america as an epitome of the decelojping continents there is only south america is fully developed in other hand north america is left behind . in comparission united state people have standard living style than the people of north america.

every country has their own government however they cannot able to develop their countries area. if there is only one goverment only strong and wealthy people take over the socitey .eventually when we take glimjpse on the ancient period of the america there was huge biasis was found due to t he domination of the white over the negro people

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85844748858 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57743053732 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9123192401 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.222222222 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18491141525 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757630035492 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704147998364 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108532372842 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066911459433 0.056905535591 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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