The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Some individuals think that the concept of cosmocracy has been suggested to come true whereas the others believe in separate national governments in different countries. However, the unification of independent governments into a global mono-government can cause risks.
First of all, there are 2 main separate mode that most of the countries in the world has done, capitalism and socialism. And the unification of independent governments also means that the consolidation of states, because there is no government can govern many countries notwithstanding it’s greatness.
Second things is that the conflict of the leaders in many countries can make it become harder than ever. For example, In fact, when Donald Trump was the US president , he did a lot of thing to make the whole country developed. However, we all know the trade war between US and China. This war prove that most of the countries in this world will try to constrain each other to bring the benefit to their own just like the USA and China in that time.
Last, it is about the freedom of a country. Even though, most of the country in the world has completely independent, we all know the cold war in the past which were begun by USA and Russia. When a war happen in a country, protecting it is a priority for any independent government. This is not a thing that a global mono-government can do.
To sumarise, the unification of independent governments into a global mono-government is an impossible thing. Instead of that we should keep maintaining this world as it has been even though there is no way to make a great only one country in the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'modes'?
Suggestion: modes
...First of all, there are 2 main separate mode that most of the countries in the world...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'mode' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'modes'.
Suggestion: modes
...First of all, there are 2 main separate mode that most of the countries in the world...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of things'.
Suggestion: a lot of things
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'proves'.
Suggestion: proves
...rade war between US and China. This war prove that most of the countries in this worl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, whereas, for example, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85663082437 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99095362241 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530465949821 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9689511084 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7857142857 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29601403165 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942781878934 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631304738187 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171616394423 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563535653181 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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