Computers are increasingly used in education. In which areas do you think are computers more important and in which areas are teachers more important?
In today's technological era, computers are becoming primary requirement for educational systems, however, there are still some sectors in which teachers are indispensable.
There is no doubt that automation in any field can be brought by means of computers. In other words, in order to automate any task such as examination procedure, students' report generation system computers are necessary. For example, for many schools, in present time, technological equipments are first choice for taking online tests. Another sector where it is important is technical fields such as computer engineering, information and technologies. If computers are not available in such sectors, it is similar to land cripple plane.
On the flip side, teachers also play a vital role in learning system. When decision-making skills are the base of any specific sector, teachers are at highest priority to inculcate them because by only watching some videos or lectures one can not develop it. For instance, charter accountant are always looking for face-to-face guidance. Tutors are also responsible for continuous evaluation of students because computers only give you statistical outcomes but can not illustrate about students' nature and capabilities. Many teachers, nowadays, arrange extra classes as per students' response.
In my opinion, technology and tutors are both fundamental pillars of education systems. Computers can fulfil requirements of content for learners but when it comes to analyzing and responding one progress teachers are indispensable.
In conclusion, however, both medium of learning to have their own scope, I think an ideal learning system can be made by merging them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61176470588 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00270287059 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662745098039 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2144808738 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.214285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145840522669 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048955255051 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497636120495 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849166480559 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485921624615 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.