Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some, it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this?
one of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people getting news and awareness from tv. there is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that tv has become an essential part of life can not only contribute to increasing awareness, but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages being offered by tv, not only can benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and standard of their life, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of a better life is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system, can one broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibilities, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of watching tv.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that, the benefits of watching tv are indeed too great to ignore.
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| 2021-10-12 | bilalaslam239@gmail.com | 77 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80912863071 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78252199941 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589211618257 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5864034877 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.363636364 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145281870574 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549800959651 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439934333278 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814628522949 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431677331265 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.