IT is better to learn the way people lived in the past through films and vedio records than written documents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Undoubtedly, technology is seeping into people's life so smoothly. Moreover, a few masses contend, this technology is beneficial in learning people more knowledge; however, others prefer paper work. Hence, this essay is an attempt of discussing both schools of thoughts but i am of the opinion, i am agree with this notion upto large extend.
On the one hand, urarguably, contemporary days are witnessing that modernization makes human life more comfortable, what it means? It helps to reduce effort for any task either it's mentally or physically. For instance, there are plenty of movies like kesari,saragari,chaar sahibzaade, mahabharat ,and so on which is the one of the best way to grasp the knowledge within short period of time. Furthermore, it is much easier than book; to be more precise, both the illiterate and literate one's are applicable to expand the knowledge about the history without any complications.
In addition, during the modern era, individuals have limited time owing to hactic schedule so they save it by watching short movies or animated documentaries instead of reading books. Here, plethora of platforms are available nowadays to make it possible as easy as pie such as Youtube, Netflix, byju's, google ,and what not.
On the other side, written notes also plays am immense role in human's life since it didn't need any power supply to provide information.thus, it works on offline mode. Hard copy reduces affect on eyesight as compared to modern hogh-rays screen visuals . It not just boost our reading ability but also uplift the concentration level. Cognitive and Motor skills can be developed by reading books.
To conclude, although, this essay contains a heated debate regarding this content ,i codemn that learning through vedios and documentaries holds more water than written documents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.264604811 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98854697522 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690721649485 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0099811709 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.428571429 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102548154047 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288954446479 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351250893703 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0560629563514 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446107184658 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.