Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone's life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree
advertising gains prevalence and it plays an inescapable part in human life. it is a controversial issue over the magnitude of advertising to people’s lives. while I suppose that advertising activities exert a positive impact on our lives, I also subscribe to the opinion that its disadvantages are obvious.
On the one hand, there is little room for doubt that the prevalence of advertising is undeniable because of its benefits. Firstly, advertising assists consumers to get access to manifold products in the blink of an eye through social media and the Internet. As a result, the development of advertisement brings people a sense of convenience and allows consumers to put their time aside when they want to purchase a product. Secondly, advertising gives people a chance to have a better understanding of products’ details and prices. Thanks to that, customers could compare products as well as make the best shopping decision with ease.
On the other hand, it stands to reason that there are several conspicuous drawbacks of advertising. First, some companies make use of advertisements in order to exaggerate the quality of products while real ones do not come up to consumers’ expectations. As a consequence, people will have a feeling of depression and disappointment after buying those products. Furthermore, advertising also gives rise to unnecessary consumption because of a desire to get a new product when people easily get exposed to it. Hence, they will squander their money on shopping and encounter financial adversities.
In conclusion, it is evident that advertising is of popularity and seems familiar to us. Although I believe that there are multiple benefits of advertising, it is my contention that it is disadvantageous as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, i suppose, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32028469751 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29215156498 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590747330961 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6868199691 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230322913405 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747690914709 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637432030446 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139744129683 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699894811783 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.