TPO41 Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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...each knowledgde others ans chosed this job. Some believes teachers contempora...
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...ers ans chosed this job. Some believes teachers contemporary world better si...
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...s contemporary world better situation community others argued past teacher...
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...rary world better situation community others argued past teachers were high...
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...tter situation community others argued past teachers were higher degree respec...
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...gued past teachers were higher degree respect regard. my view teachers wil...
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...ast teachers were higher degree respect regard. my view teachers wil apprecie...
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...s were higher degree respect regard. my view teachers wil apprecieated more ...
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...were higher degree respect regard. my view teachers wil apprecieated more the...
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...my view teachers wil apprecieated more these days rather than past. First...
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...pprecieated more these days rather than past. First, modern life people fi...
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...hese days rather than past. First, modern life people find out more role ...
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...First, modern life people find out more role knowledge teacher impact educ...
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... modern life people find out more role knowledge teacher impact education ...
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...e people find out more role knowledge teacher impact education life fut...
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...find out more role knowledge teacher impact education life future rather ...
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...ore role knowledge teacher impact education life future rather than pe...
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... knowledge teacher impact education life future rather than people past ...
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...dge teacher impact education life future rather than people past this ...
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...ct education life future rather than people past this understanding will b...
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...ation life future rather than people past this understanding will bring more...
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... life future rather than people past this understanding will bring more degre...
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...his understanding will bring more degree value appreciation. Nowadays having be...
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...erstanding will bring more degree value appreciation. Nowadays having better li...
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...re degree value appreciation. Nowadays having better life, income,job ... peop...
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...e, income,job ... people need knowledge means need somebody who teach them. a...
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...me,job ... people need knowledge means need somebody who teach them. an mo...
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...need knowledge means need somebody who teach them. an modern life higher pe...
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...eans need somebody who teach them. an modern life higher percent kids go sch...
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... them. an modern life higher percent kids go school read, write or inform...
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...n modern life higher percent kids go school read, write or information abo...
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...ern life higher percent kids go school read, write or information about geogra...
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...ercent kids go school read, write or information about geography rather than ...
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... information about geography rather than past comparasion between 1810s 2010s...
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...mation about geography rather than past comparasion between 1810s 2010s US, 20...
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... than past comparasion between 1810s 2010s US, 20 percent kids 1810s went ...
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...past comparasion between 1810s 2010s US, 20 percent kids 1810s went elemen...
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...ion between 1810s 2010s US, 20 percent kids 1810s went elementray school 20...
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...ent kids 1810s went elementray school 2010s this number increased 80 percent ...
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...ray school 2010s this number increased 80 percent this shows understanding p...
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... 2010s this number increased 80 percent this shows understanding people from r...
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...number increased 80 percent this shows understanding people from role teacher...
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...d 80 percent this shows understanding people from role teacher this understa...
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...s shows understanding people from role teacher this understanding brings more ...
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...understanding people from role teacher this understanding brings more respect ...
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... this understanding brings more respect appreciation. So, This role made teacher...
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...n. So, This role made teachers important community Second, Acceptance job ...
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...rtant community Second, Acceptance job by community will bring respect ap...
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...mmunity Second, Acceptance job by community will bring respect appreciati...
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...e job by community will bring respect appreciation todays teachers more comm...
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...mmunity will bring respect appreciation todays teachers more common more accpe...
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...g respect appreciation todays teachers more common more accpeted rather than ...
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...preciation todays teachers more common more accpeted rather than past this ...
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... more common more accpeted rather than past this reason teachers more appr...
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... common more accpeted rather than past this reason teachers more appreciate...
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...n more accpeted rather than past this reason teachers more appreciate than p...
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...ther than past this reason teachers more appreciate than past old days. pa...
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...rs more appreciate than past old days. past, Communities refuesing knowledg sc...
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.... past, Communities refuesing knowledg science. Thus shows no respect value ...
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...nities refuesing knowledg science. Thus shows no respect value teachers nowa...
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...ect value teachers nowadays teachers an important job necessary people th...
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...ers nowadays teachers an important job necessary people this brings them deg...
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...ob necessary people this brings them degree appreciation. an example, Today...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 15.1003584229 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 52.1666666667 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 270.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92222222222 4.8611393121 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5186345945 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540740740741 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.0257390996 48.9658058833 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 5.45110844103 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 121.0 5.5376344086 2185% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201346572997 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879544689876 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709011841059 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16033568785 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056845047361 0.0645574589148 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.76 10.9000537634 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.