Some people say that playing computer games is bad for children in every aspect. Others say that playing computer games can have positive effects on the way children develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In current days, many people will not allow their children to play video games because it can negatively affect children’s activities and thinking. Personally, I totally have strong unaccepted opinions about this development.
Admittedly, one may argue that spending time on playing video games is time-consuming and meaningless activities because children need to be forced to participate in educational activities such as solving mathematics-related homework, commuting to the library to study on a daily basis, etc. However, with the development of technology and science, video games play a leading important role in children’s educational activities. It is true that children always have miserable emotions when they encounter challenging boring tasks such as homework, yet the appearance of video games can solve this negative development effectively by attracting children utilizing not only their brains but also their different body parts to tackle the challenging homework.
Granted, one might argue that in lieu of playing games, children should go outsides and participate in sociable activities because they have to develop both communication and academic skills. Generally speaking, in some cases this opinion can be definitely exact because children will become passive individuals in competitive life. In contrast, through Covid 19 pandemic, people around the world have to recognize the crucial role of playing video games. Thanks to the appearance of games, even though staying at home for at least 10 months, children can have opportunities to keep their daily routines always on track such as communicating with their buddies, doing regular exercises on a daily basis. Moreover, parents also have a quintessential chance to lend assistance to their children through playing with them.
In conclusion, I myself reckon that video games play a leading crucial role in both educational and daily activities, so that is the important key in the perfect development of children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, at least, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in some cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65562913907 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10325501019 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562913907285 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.4021904947 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.272727273 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4545454545 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290000639758 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126371763048 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482991206902 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199517487265 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166900905161 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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