Although more and more people read the news on the internet, newspaper will remain the main of source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree with the statement
Many people said that although many people read the information or news on some websites or technological devices, newspaper is still the main of source of news. However, I strongly belive that when people read news on the internet, newspaper also disappear because few people buy newspapers to read. Moreover, people feel unconvenient when picking up a big newspaper to read rather than a small mobile phone or other devices. And this essay will address the reasons for my views as followed.
To begin with a great deal of advocates are inclined toward the fact that there is a decrease in the number of people buying newspaper. This is because of the appearance of reading the news on the internet. When reading the news on the internet, people can save money that they spend on buying newspapers. Moreover, they can save more time that they waste on waiting in line to buy newspapers. Besides, the news on the internet are updated more quickly than the news on the newspapers. A survey by Oxford University reveals that more than 85% of people who used to buy newspaper have switched to read news on the internet. This figure exposes that the trendy of reading on the internet is going up.
On top of that convenience is the main reason why people give up newspapers. In the 4.0 age, people hope to update information quickly and trendly. However, newspapers don’t meet these demand of most people. Newspapers are updated everyday but many people buy them lead to other people can’t buy them. Moreover, newspapers are big sheets so people feel unconvenient when reading them on train or bus station. Besides, the news of newspapers doesn’t have many interesting images and information to attach readers. For example, a survey in 2008, shows that the reasons for switching to read news on the internet are interesting images, saving time and money, exact information. Among those reasons, more than 60% of people taking part in survey choose exact information, which they like the most when reading news on the internet.
In conclusion, it is cetain that newspapers don’t bring about more convenience to readers than reading on the internet. For this reason, many people choose to read news on the internet instead buy newspapers to read.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... of most people. Newspapers are updated everyday but many people buy them lead to other ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 751, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to exact'
Suggestion: to exact
... of people taking part in survey choose exact information, which they like the most w...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, moreover, so, still, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59622968692 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4468200989 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5714285714 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0952380952 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447677086558 0.244688304435 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157088770068 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879524630771 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330317557036 0.151304729494 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275219865416 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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