You have been renting an apartment in an English-Speaking Country. The landlord has been very helpful and friendly. Now you are leaving, and one of your friends would like to move into the apartment.
Write a letter to your landlord.
In your letter
Explain when and why you are leaving
Thank your landlord for the help
Tell him about your friend
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Prakash, your tenant of Grand Residences and I am writing to inform you that I will be renewing the tenancy contract and will be moving from apartment number 9.
I would like to inform you that I got a job offer from Texas Instruments in Detroit. They are offering me a role to manage the circuit designer team in Detroit. As you know, travelling from Windsor everyday is gruelling due to traffic congestions on the bridge. I have found an apartment in Detroit and planning to move by 30th of November from your Windsor apartment located near the University campus.
I can not forget all the help you extended when I moved to Windsor in 2012. You were considerate to new immigrant like me. I want to thank you for all your insights and helped me find a job in my field in 2015. It is very rare to find people like you who extend the support without any expectation in return. Thank you for helping me and I truly appreciate it.
I want to let you know that my friend will be contact you soon. His name is Mahesh Kumar, a software engineer moving from India for a master’s degree program at the University of Windsor. I have given him the details about this apartment, and he is keen on renting it as it is close to the campus. Kindly email the details on the rental price and he would like to close the deal.
Thanks again everything, looking to meet you before I leave.
Regards,
Prakash
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Smith, I am Prakash, your tenant of Grand Resid...
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Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...t. As you know, travelling from Windsor everyday is gruelling due to traffic congestions...
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Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent located near the University campus. I can not forget all the help you extend...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to meet you before I leave. Regards, Prakash
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45627376426 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45245085027 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574144486692 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8035416393 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1333333333 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266454907411 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793681855123 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554504176606 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130778441144 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468790865003 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.