Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. While other people think that taking part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is proposed that people will obtain more positive sides for engaging in team sports. Meanwhile, others hold a belief that is played individually have better to participate in tennis or swimming. From my perspective, I admitted that both types of sports are equally advantageous.
First of all, it is irrefutable that by joining in team sports are learning about how coordination among members. Indeed, in sport fields, people always keep individual ambitions for steeping to the first ranked in one match. Nevertheless, they are needed to cooperate towards the common goal. Whereby utilize their effort to maximize their energies for leading the team throughout the competition. In addition, those who play soccer are taught to work effectively and also sacrifice for the sake of their team.
On the other hand, an individual who is working independently is which is virtually fostering all their capabilities. What it is interpreted that is not needed assistance from others, they are quite exerting themselves to come up with any solutions to be a winner with a pretty challenge. Giving evidence for supporting the argument, in playing tennis, a player has to foresee the ball where it might befall and even be agile in their movement. Otherwise, they need to manifest their plan accompanying with the multi-task to think up with all the risk situations which will happen in such match by avoiding any injuries on the yard.
In conclusion, both types of sport have the deserve of evolving player’s personality. However, it depends on each player in choosing as to sports what they should do.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...In conclusion, both types of sport have the deserve of evolving player’s personality. Howev...
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Suggestion:
...osing as to sports what they should do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12213740458 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87911771282 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625954198473 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8737150521 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8571428571 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178807167924 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610572547322 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390168291988 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113222564686 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511482330494 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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