Mass media and the internet have caused people’s attention spans to get shorter. However, the overall effect has been positive: while people are less able to focus on one thing, they more than make up for it with an enhanced ability to sort through large quantities of information and find what’s important.
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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
With the increased globalization of the world internet and its use for a plethora of information has become a necessity of most people. Due to various innovations in technology mankind's knowledge is enhancing simultaneously. Technology has a great influence on society where mass media and the internet are a pivotal part of this improved society. The prompt states that because of the use of mass media and the internet people's ability to concentrate on different things is getting shorter. However, In my opinion, I disagree with the recommendation and argue that the collective effect on the internet is mostly positive for humans.
To begin, for every technology there are two aspects just like the two sides of a coin i.e. advantages and disadvantages. As mass media provides us with vast amounts of data and accessibility from all over the world in a way has simplified human life to the greatest degree. Nowadays, a variety of resources are made possible due to the enhanced technology and the information we get now is at our fingertips. If we have any simple or even the most complicated question, then it is very easy to get an instant solution through the internet. Thus, the internet has brought people from all over the earth together and made them closer to each other rather than hindering their lifestyle.
Secondly, in this fast-paced world, it is of utmost importance to focus on multiple things at the same time. Indeed, technology is associated with our day-to-day activities from the very beginning of our day till the end. For instance, a working person can start his day peacefully while commuting to the workplace via automobiles, buses, or any other form of transport. If these advancements had never been given birth to, then it would have been such a task to reach our work on time. In addition, if a person forgets about switching off the heater's button, then it's not that big of a deal in today's world with home automation services that are installed in many houses and can be operated by mobile apps.
Although the impact of mass media and the internet is positive on our life, we should not deny its negative effects. The availability of the internet has also given rise to unwanted problems in our life. For example, mass media provides us with information about different events happening around the whole world. This exchange of thoughts, ideas, and opinions about an event is possible through mass media. Consequently, people follow this source to keep them updated with things happening all around the world. However, it is difficult for people to differentiate between authenticated sources and sources that spread false information. As a result, the public might get distracted by the plethora of information available.
To sum up, some people argue that advanced technology has abridged the thinking process of the people because of variety of data and its consequences are bad on our life, but to make the most of our technological advancements one must maintain a proper balance between its usage. Only when we are able to maintain the balance between modern mass media and the internet can be proven fruitful and we can think more deeply. In this way, we can continue our daily activities with ease and make decisions more productively with the help of the internet and mass media.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 566, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... switching off the heaters button, then its not that big of a deal in todays world ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 89.0 58.6224719101 152% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2777.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 559.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96779964222 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86242540663 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81763295952 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502683363148 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 889.2 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.676283016 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.08 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.36 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.24 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286476177119 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764419582454 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500364987821 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159932860069 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531026298612 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 100.480337079 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.