The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country.
Do the advantages out outweigh the disadvantages?
For many year before, there has been an proposal about global government, with the idea thought that the world needs only one government instead of lots of separated nations. This notion, beside the benefits, would potentially make other problems
The global mono- government would solve easily the conflict of region, racism, and language also. Take the US federation government as an instance, so far, it has been addressing problem among the states. Nevertheless, following some research, this one just one stabilize its affection around a small range of 50 states, and most of the citizens have a faith in the united constitution of their country. Therefore, the concept of nation government must work on thousands of states with diametrically differing ideologies. This fantasy like authority syentem would actually make an acceptable decision for all region.
Other advantages that the tax issues around the region nowadays could be talked more effortlessly by a single universal government. To be more specific, collecting and wealth redistributing to economically disadvantaged zones; starvation, income inequity and poverty would be resolved. That is also the way of Chinese government doing in 2021 with all Chinese cooperation, for the purpose of all going up. But in fact, there exist a potential insecurity in it. If the tax was taking for a long time without any benefits it would eventually trigger resentment, unrelenting demonstrations and social unrest.
In summary, the advantages of universal concentrated government but also existing many drawbacks. However, overcoming our selfish and accepting the going down of social in the first 50 years, we may create a new system never born in the history of the humanity. And imagine, that system will able to the key of developing next generation of science which giving human being a change to a real exploration of universe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun year seems to be countable; consider using: 'many years'.
Suggestion: many years
For many year before, there has been an proposal abou...
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Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
For many year before, there has been an proposal about global government, with ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s, would potentially make other problems The global mono- government would solve ...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...onflict of region, racism, and language also. Take the US federation government as a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, in fact, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34113712375 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98964106778 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3056870425 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.071428571 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199412571223 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595548645053 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518620412431 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111017096258 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392336644288 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.