The graph gives information about the number of people in Australia who used Chinese, Arabic, Italian or Greek as their first mother tongue.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the percentage of people who use technology in the UK from the year of 2000 to 2005.
Overall, technology usage increased rapidly through time in every aspect. The number of people who used the Internet, social media and broadband steadily increased. Even though hi-tech devices such as smartphones, smartwatch, tablets appeared 10 years later, they caught a huge amount of users.
The amount of people who had surfed the Internet grew about three times in 15 years from 30% in 2000 to 90% in 2015. The number of people who joined social media also widely expanded through the course of 10 years since 2005, from the tiny minority of 2% to the vast majority of 80%. The group of people who owned broadband at their house reached its peak in 2015 at 73%, an increase of more than 70% in 15 years.
The usage of hi-tech devices only started to be used in 2010 but the number of people who used them was huge. The group of people who owned a smartwatch had grown fifthed through 5 years. The percentage of smartphone consumption and the percentage of tablet consumption were almost the same, at around 45% over 5 years.
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- In many countries fast food is becoming cheaper and more available Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvanatages 84
- The diagram below shows the changes to the town of Seaville Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
- Some people think the money spent on developing technology for space exploration is not justified There are more beneficial ways to spend this money To what extent do you agree or disagree 80
- Some people believe that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed However others people think that zoos are useful to protect rare animals Discuss both views and give your opinion 90
- Some educationalists say every child should be taught to play musical instrument To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rity of 2% to the vast majority of 80%. The group of people who owned broadband at ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...increase of more than 70% in 15 years. The usage of hi-tech devices only started t...
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Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...umber of people who used them was huge. The group of people who owned a smartwatch ...
^^^
Line 4, column 188, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...atch had grown fifthed through 5 years. The percentage of smartphone consumption an...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67326732673 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42246697409 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559405940594 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.7252689416 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144235903926 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653360609833 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503057605092 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987656843782 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02074225532 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.