Many people believe that parents are not as close to their children as they used to be. Do you agree or disagree? Give your explanation in an essay of 250 words.
In this day and age, when the living standard of a family has risen considerably, which leads to many more and more demands on material values, it seems that adults are gradually moving away from the values of the family. And I completely agree with the given statement that parents are now not as familiar with their children as they used to be.
To begin with, parents are too busy with their jobs to pay attention to their children. They are willing to work full-time to earn enough money to be able to pay all the household expenses, children’s school fees and save some money to accumulate for unexpected hardships in the future. That causes them not to foster their children as carefully as when the kids were little. For example, a usual worker can have to work more than 10-12 hours per day or night, with this amount of work, they come back home exhausted and go to sleep immediately. Surely, no time for parental care and support.
In addition to the reason above, they also face up to the gap between two generations, which is bigger and bigger, especially in this transitional period between the late 20th-century parents and the early 21st-century kids. That makes sense why all the members in their family usually have many thoughts and beliefs, which will break out arguments and in the end, the results of them can not satisfy everyone.
In conclusion, two main reasons are leading to the fact that parents do not have a close relationship with their children at present. I know it is hard for parents to balance both work time and family time. If this situation continues, it will weaken the family bond and no one will be happy in the far future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65540540541 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4643550919 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581081081081 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2127324751 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.833333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189516751959 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754317026604 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641713452475 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117233980064 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344601359046 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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