The given graph show the number of incidents in 3 different area in New Port City Center
The line graph below illustrates the data about the proportion of crimes committed in three types of offence named Burglary, Car Theft and Robbery in New Port City center in a period of 9 years between 2003 and 2012.
Overall, the incidences of Burglary and Car Theft declined steadily in the beginning period and stabilized at the end of the period, while the figures for Robbery remained stable over the period, helping the incidences of Car Theft become the main criminal trend at the end of the period.
In 2003, the most popular crimes occurred in New Port City center was Burglary, with the report of the incident being approximately 3500. This was far higher than Car Theft which was around 2700 incidents; and underwent sevenfold more than Robbery which remained above 500 incidents. However , the incidences of Bullary fell down dramatically over a 5-year timescale, before remaining gradually until just under 1250 incidents occurred.
By contrast, Car Theft became a more popular crime at much higher levels. Moreover,apart from a brief fall from 2005 to 2006, the incidences of Car Theft increased gradually and overtook the incidences of Burglary. The figure then remained at the end of the period. But, the incidences of Robbery still remained constant over the period and become the least crimes happened in New Port City Center
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'graphs'.
Suggestion: graphs
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Suggestion:
...riod of 9 years between 2003 and 2012. Overall, the incidences of Burglary and ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iminal trend at the end of the period. In 2003, the most popular crimes occurre...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ch remained above 500 incidents. However , the incidences of Bullary fell down dra...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...il just under 1250 incidents occurred. By contrast, Car Theft became a more pop...
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Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , apart
...ar crime at much higher levels. Moreover,apart from a brief fall from 2005 to 2006, th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, moreover, still, then, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 1.0 24.0651302605 4% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06222222222 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59079392707 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1168135914 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.555555556 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187464370411 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924482665089 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912157342485 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129934212909 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515658584894 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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