Some people believe that studying at university or colleges is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both view and give an opinion.
Nowadays, most of the students are taking a separate direction of their career. people these days have different views about what students should do after they leave school. While many people have different opinions about their career. people assert that school is the only way to guarantee a stable job, in my opinion I think it is better for them to pursue universities or colleges.
On the other hand, some other people argue that having a job after leaving school would help people gain experience and skills that they have never learned at high school. Moreover, they work early which will help them earn more money to serve the needs of life. because they enter the workforce early, it allows them to afford enough money to pay for their hobbies like travelling, eating, and drinking or shopping.
However, it is better for humans to spend time studying at the university because it provides them with an proper knowledge base in the subject they are going to explore further during their career. going to an academic institute makes a person aware of the society, available options, and their own strengths. people get to learn more in the academic environment and become the best judge of their own path in life . In addition, most employers will be more impressed by candidates who have qualifications from a university than those with fewer qualifications, which in turn leads university graduates not only to better job opportunities, but also to higher incomes.
In conclusion, although people may differ in their opinion , I think that to be successful career requires a background related to higher education and good skills in the fields. Furthermore, the experience also depends on the jobs.
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- Some people believe that studying at university or colleges is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school Discuss both view and give an opinion 73
- It is better for students to study from home rather than going to school Do you agree or diagree with statement 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0176056338 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63022834173 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595070422535 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4520008712 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.615384615 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249460277822 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829100330174 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065386092679 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141757077127 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450902143641 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.