The graph below shows the percentage of part time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The percentage of part-time workforces in the United Kingdom is represented in the bar chart.
Overall, the proportion in England, Scotland, Wales increased over the given year, with Scotland increasing the fastest. Conversely, the decrease was seen only in the Nothern Ireland.
To begin, Wales's proportion for part-time workers in 1980 stood the highest at above three in ten and inclined approximately 35 percent, being the country with the most number of employees. Also, England's figure accounted at around a quarter then finised at just below one-third percent after 30-year period, making it as the second most employeed country after Wales.
Moreover, the figure for Scotland jumped from the lowest at just above one in ten to almost two in ten, noting itself as the country with fastest growing workers among the British countries. In contrast, the percentage for the Northern Ireland fell from around 15 percent to 13 percent in 2010, being the second lowest after Scotland.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...land increasing the fastest. Conversely, the decrease was seen only in the Nother...
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Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... only in the Nothern Ireland. To begin, Waless proportion for part-time workers ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the fastest'.
Suggestion: with the fastest
...wo in ten, noting itself as the country with fastest growing workers among the British count...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, moreover, second, so, then, third, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25316455696 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59586275542 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626582278481 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2751310652 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.571428571 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 5.23603664747 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140786820072 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702982456603 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713937611084 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996097054061 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805912689566 0.0819641961636 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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