Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?
In this day and age, it is undeniable that technology has a significant bearing on all facets of our life, including education, work and communication.In this regard, it is agreeable that changes in way of interaction to each other are attributable to the technology. This essay will explore how technology has impacted our relationships and why this has been a positive development
Modern technology has shaped our relationships in a myriad of ways. In fact, many citizens find it easy to form new relationships through virtual platforms. By having an online account, everyone can make friends, share their stories and communicate with each other all around the world. For instance, a wide range of social media , including Facebook, Instagram, offers private groups and pages where users can share hobbies with like-minded people, which results in having intimate relationships and creating a supportive environment.
It is agreeable that the invention of technology has made strides in human beings’ lives. Regardless of the physical distances, people can keep in touch and exchange information immediately with the assistance of emails and social media networks. Its merit can be seen apparently in the Covid-19 pandemic when the social distancing is regarded as a hindrance that does not allow people to hang out and visit their friends and relatives. Consequently, technology is a predominant and effective tool that enables people to connect with the rest of the world.
In conclusion, technology is of great importance in maintaining close-knit relationships. It not only influences positively how people interact with each other but also connects people to be closer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46564885496 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1633198619 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606870229008 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4935622557 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.181818182 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37333748428 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120548953883 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802966704406 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211642767162 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731944383741 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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