Describe a fear you had to overcome How did you overcome it

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ears only at the time of exam. Whenever Im preparing for the exam or writing mock ...
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...ng for the exam or writing mock tests I didnt feel tensed. This is due to the fact th...
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Suggestion: make
... answer then that frustration will also makes me anxious. There are some steps that...
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Suggestion: don't
...come this fear is to practice a lot and dont think about bad result while writing th...
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Suggestion: Also,
...o that no bad thoughts came to my mind. Also I thought a healthy diet plays a import...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'play'?
Suggestion: play
... my mind. Also I thought a healthy diet plays a important role in keep your mind calm...
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...nd. Also I thought a healthy diet plays a important role in keep your mind calm. ...
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...nd will not get distracted. I think all this things are helping me to overcome throu...
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... and how it is affecting your life then youll be able to find the solution and youre ...
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... youll be able to find the solution and youre following each and every step of that s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, while, i feel, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25872093023 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22694720976 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494186046512 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7613143265 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1052631579 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1052631579 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84210526316 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166649064347 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562157916953 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068065906983 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115415040505 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0111672285776 0.0645574589148 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 10.9000537634 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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