Describe an annual day in your country when you give people special gifts
In my country, there are so many days on which we distribute special gifts to people. People of different religions have different days to celebrate as their annual day. For example, Hindus have Deepawali to celebrate as their annual day, Muslims have Eid as their annual day, Christians have Christmas to celebrate as their annual day. But there is one thing common in all these different annual days. All people give sweets and food to each other as a gift. Some people give clothes and crackers too but sweet is common among all of them.
All these annual days are celebrated due to a reason. For example, Hindu celebrate Diwali as the homecoming of Lord Ram. Christians celebrate Christmas in memory of Jesus Christ. On this day people go to their nearby religious place and meet with their friends and relatives. Hindus go to temples, Christian goes to church, Muslims goes to Mosque. In these religious places, people pray for the good health and good fortune, and well-being of their family members. The trust or the monks of the place gave blessings to the people. There is a distribution of food by the trust of the place. People also go to the home of their relatives to meet them and take blessings from them. They also take sweets for the relatives when they go home.
In some places, there is the organization of fair on these special occasions where people enjoy amusement rides and there are lots of food stalls where people can enjoy food with their friends and family. There are also lots of shops related to handlooms, toys, art and craft and a lot more. People buy things from these shops. This fair is also a source of income for many people because a huge number of people come to this fair and these fairs last for a long time around 8-10 days.
At last, in my country, different annual days belong to people of different regions and religions. But the way of celebration is almost the same for all people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62973760933 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31324527597 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446064139942 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3031128958 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1818181818 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5909090909 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.95454545455 5.45110844103 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227527661976 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06988604704 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602965617929 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147395747985 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756618177935 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.36 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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