You are writing your first letter to a pen pal. Describe your previous studies and work experience, your current activities, hobbies and interests.
Tell your pen pal that you will be visiting him/her.
• You should write at least 150 words.
• You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Hi Neha,
I hope you are doing well, as this a first communication between both of us, let me share with you a few details about myself.
Firstly, I am a post-graduate with a degree in Masters in Computer Applications and have been working in the IT industry for the past 6 years as a Technical Engineer.
Being an engineer at a technical firm, my present tasks include working on a variety of programming challenges, mentoring the junior folks and co-ordinating the communication between the clients and the management.
Consequently, I usually do not get much time to follow up on my passions, however I do find the time to pursue my hobbies over the weekends, which include going on a long drive in a pleasant weather, enjoying the sport of cricket and enjoying an occasional movie with friends.
I would also like to tell you that, I would be in your town during the next week and am planning to stopping by at your house on Saturday. Really hoping to meet you in person next weekend.
Yours Faithfully,
Gaurav
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| 2021-11-01 | Niharika rani | 89 | view |
| 2021-11-01 | Niharika rani | 89 | view |
| 2021-11-01 | Niharika rani | 87 | view |
| 2021-11-01 | Niharika rani | 73 | view |
| 2021-11-01 | Niharika rani | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...r Applications and have been working in the IT industry for the past 6 years as a Tech...
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Line 8, column 86, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...e in your town during the next week and am planning to stopping by at your house o...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71666666667 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90688306194 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655555555556 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.1219792054 44.8134815571 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.285714286 76.5299724578 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 4.34317383033 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204657425667 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998244948707 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775775976395 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911024902954 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910588447676 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.