You are writing your first letter to a pen pal. Describe your previous studies and work experience, your current activities, hobbies and interests.
Tell your pen pal that you will be visiting him/her.
• You should write at least 150 words.
• You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Hi Gaurav
I hope this letter find you in health and harmony, as this is my first communication with you, I have lot to share and connect. As we are new pen pals, I hope you would also be looking a meaningful friendship here, as I am quite excited about this.
First of all, I would like to share that I have done my Masters in Computer Applications from Panjab University. Most of my schooling and higher education was done in Chandigarh, as being native of here.
As I am a Software Engineer, I am very fond of programming, however, as being an extrovert and outgoing person, I am passionate about lot of other activities as well. Meeting new people, travelling, trekking, photography are few of my hobbies, along with these my love for food is eternal. Besides trying new cuisines, I have a sweet tooth for variety of baked products.
In addition to these hobbies, I appreciate good music and watching movies, particularly thriller,action,mystery.
Despite of the fact that we have started this bond by means of letters, I would really love to meet you in person. Due to some official work,I will be travelling to your city next month, therefore I hope, we can have a opportunity to meet and have a face to face conversation over a cup of coffee. I will be eagerly waiting for your revert on this.
Yours Faithfully
Niharika
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... my first communication with you, I have lot to share and connect. As we are new...
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...irst communication with you, I have lot to share and connect. As we are new pen...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lot to share and connect. As we are new pen pals, I hope you would also be looki...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... would like to share that I have done my Masters in Computer Applications from Pa...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...in Chandigarh, as being native of here. As I am a Software Engineer, I am very f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...y fond of programming, however, as being an extrovert and outgoing person, I am ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ing, however, as being an extrovert and outgoing person, I am passionate about l...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , action
...d watching movies, particularly thriller,action,mystery. Despite of the fact that we...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...you in person. Due to some official work,I will be travelling to your city next mo...
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Line 9, column 218, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...xt month, therefore I hope, we can have a opportunity to meet and have a face to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, look, really, so, therefore, well, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70338983051 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04664258251 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601694915254 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6438741204 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 4.34317383033 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175844843305 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676249783847 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615354345441 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075908373481 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751060970503 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.