You are writing your first letter to a pen pal. Describe your previous studies and work experience, your current activities, hobbies and interests.
Tell your pen pal that you will be visiting him/her.
• You should write at least 150 words.
• You should spend about 20 minutes on this task
Hi Neha,
I hope you are doing well, as this a first communication between us, let me share with you a few details about myself.
Firstly, My name is Gaurav Upadhyay and I am a post-graduate with a degree in Masters in Computer Applications and have been working in the Information Technological industry for the past 6 years as a Technical Engineer.
Being an engineer at a technical firm, my present tasks include working on a variety of programming challenges, mentoring the junior folks and co-ordinating the communication between the clients and the management. Consequently, I usually do not get much time to follow up on my passions, however I do find the time to pursue my hobbies over the weekends. Which include going on a long drive in a pleasant weather, enjoying the sport of cricket and enjoying an occasional movie with friends.
We can connect more with each other in the upcoming month. As, I will be in your town during the next month due to a friend's wedding and thinking of stopping by at your house. Really hoping to meet you in person.
Awaiting your reply to my letter. Please tell me all about yourself and your hobbies. I hope we can become good friends.
Yours Faithfully,
Gaurav
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77251184834 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89250989769 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649289099526 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.1457783897 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9166666667 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210460172729 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824074131938 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737518708788 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111029543366 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747897444326 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.