Some people think that the purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and workers rather than to benefit them as individuals To what extent do you agree or disagree
There are various viewpoints on the school's mission. Some argue that education is about preparing students to be good citizens and workers. Others argue that the purpose of school is to help children grow as individuals. And, in my opinion, schools should prepare students to be good citizens and workers. In this article, we'll talk about that point of view.
The school contributes to the education of the next generation, the country's future owners. First and foremost, it should be stated that the school is the cradle of the young generation. It is a place where we can learn and be taught about all aspects of life. The culture of daily behavior is derived from basic knowledge in life. From ethics to understanding. Everything is teachable in school.
School teaches children a lot of complementary knowledge, which they will use when they leave school and go to work. Furthermore, schools teach children how to behave properly in order to reduce crime and evil. Schools also teach children how to behave properly in order for them to become good citizens. People in less developed countries, for example, continue to lack awareness in many areas, including traffic violations, social evils, and environmental protection. However, only school can teach them these virtues in the most effective way, forming their good sense from an early age.
Rather than teaching personal skills such as drawing, singing, dancing, and sports, schools frequently teach children knowledge and good moral qualities so that they can become useful citizens for society, contributing to the building of a rich and strong country.
In short, rather than personal development, the primary purpose of schools, in my opinion, is to prepare students to be productive workers and law-abiding citizens. It is the most effective way to contribute to the nation's
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'schools'' or 'school's'?
Suggestion: schools'; school's
There are various viewpoints on the schools mission. Some argue that education is a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, in short, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19798657718 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74753534968 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553691275168 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.2731943945 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5263157895 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6842105263 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21657490521 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626769873895 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483786181872 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114831973213 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040126724565 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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