Behind the people are often influenced in their behaviors and situations by others in the same age.This is called pressure do they disadvantages of "peer pressure".out with the advantages?
It is a indisputable that the youth has a propensity to follow others, especially their mates whose attitudes influence them a lot. It has both negative and positive impacts on young beed. Here, I would like to assert that the demerits of this trend outweigh merits.
There are manifold demerits of this phenomenon. First and foremost, in this contemporary epoch, the trend of a taking drugs is on the elevation among youngsters. children spend most of time with their friends in school, college and university and they are expected to become the victim of drug addiction on account of having bad company. A drug addicted people always fall into frustration and life becomes exhausted for them. Besides this, having negative association always prompt a person to engage in nasty habits like robbery, human trafficking, murder, snatching and so on. Needless to say, living in bad company have detrimental effects on the career of people and it can spoil their life. Adding to it, youngsters are expected to demand for expensive things from their parents under the influence of affluent people. On thebcontrary, opposite wind is also there.
To commence with, interacting with friends who have a good sentiments help others to change their outlook and diverted them to positive sides. Moreover, it also emerge social and moral etiquettes among them. Furthermore, In case of a study, a boy or girl who has extremely performance in academic fields can stimulate other juveniles to toiling hard in study which will be beneficial to ameliorate their grade.
To recapitulate, undeniably peer pressure have some beneficial impacts on youngsters but it's negative side cannot be neglected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20955882353 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7980791383 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639705882353 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7022245994 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163926146386 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452575043488 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309241086336 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880665364168 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164971260476 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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