You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Describe why you are having the party
Give directions on how to get to the venue
Suggest how you can accommodate him/her
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sarah,
I hope ypu are doing well. You will be glad to know that I am going to organize a party for my promotion at work,
and want to invite you on this special occasion on next Friday.
As you know, I have been working for an IT company for past few years. Recently, I took part in an project and company got a huge benefit from my participation. Therefore, the manager assigned me the higher position at the work place. So, I decided to arrange a small function to celebrate my success. Not only will it be a fun gathering, but we'll have a great time to relive our nostalgic memories.
Since the guest list is quite extensive, I,ve decided to have the party at 'The Aroma' hotel in Chandigarh. If you will come from your city, it
would be best to take the National Highway. The restaurant is on this road.
It is extreme hot weather these days, I've booked a room for us in the hotel. So that you could take rest for some time, as you will travel a lot to attend the party.
I hope you will be able to join us for the celebration.
Yours truly,
Haron.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ganize a party for my promotion at work, and want to invite you on this special o...
^^^
Line 6, column 38, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
... As you know, I have been working for an IT company for past few years. Recently, I...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 44, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...you know, I have been working for an IT company for past few years. Recently, I took pa...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 97, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ast few years. Recently, I took part in an project and company got a huge benefit ...
^^
Line 6, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elebrate my success. Not only will it be a fun gathering, but well have a great t...
^^
Line 8, column 43, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ve
...nce the guest list is quite extensive, I,ve decided to have the party at The Aroma ...
^^^
Line 8, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arh. If you will come from your city, it would be best to take the National Highw...
^^^
Line 11, column 39, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... It is extreme hot weather these days, Ive booked a room for us in the hotel. So t...
^^^
Line 11, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oked a room for us in the hotel. So that you could take rest for some time, as yo...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28431372549 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34686716009 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632352941176 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0856634016 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.4285714286 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203937715173 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652329980948 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594201971592 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992879280753 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654789910722 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.95 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.