More and more people are living in big cities these days. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this for society and individuals?
Nowadays, there are more and more people living in big cities. Most people like being in the big city because of the advantages it has over the countryside. However, is it really the best choice? In this essay, I will point out the advantages and disadvantages of living in a big city.
Let’s start looking at the advantages.One of the most useful points of big cities is that you can find shop in every corner of the city.This means you can buy any necessary items without going far to find them.For example: banks, supermarkets, restaurants,... So your life becomes much more convenient and easier. Moreover, there are many job opportunities in the big city. This is also one of the main reasons that everyone wants to live in a big city. Finally, the big cities have a lot of entertainment areas where everyone wants to come after grueling and stressful hours of study or work.
Turning to the other side of the argument.Traffic is one of the major disadvantages of living in a big city. Indeed, Apart from peak hours, the time between 8 am to 9 am and between 4 pm to 5 pm also witnesses long lines of vehicles, mainly motorbikes, struggling to get out of narrow streets. This happens in many major cities in Vietnam. In addition, there is consequently a lot of smog and this can really affect people’s health.
In conclusion, although some people think living in big cities causes a great deal of drawbacks, I strongly restate that this tendency creates many advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74903474903 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88258524847 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1245730606 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8571428571 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340160716573 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123231287391 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102256638062 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219177356862 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12063082115 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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