Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
Along with the development of technology and business, there are too many residents in urban areas. Simultaneously, the massive rise in population has resulted in some problems. This paragraph would list two adverse issues below and solutions to this issue as well.
Firstly, crime is the worst consequence in metropolitan areas. Densely-populated areas have a tendency to commit crimes more than uncrowded ones. It is due to the fact that the gap between the rich and the poor remains. Not only adults but also youngsters and children endeavor to steal money and rob stores. Therefore, the discrimination has to be wiped out first to ensure a friendly living environment. Drastic actions should be taken such as accommodating the homeless by constructing more community houses. Moreover, the government also has to raise resident’s awareness and level of education.
The second problem is the impacts on the environment. In megacities in which millions of people live, the environment gets really bad. The reason is the rise in residents will lead to the rise in public transport, garbage, food miles. The system that tackles garbage has not been advanced enough for the density of Hanoians. It is about time for the government to impose more strict laws in trash solving companies for a better environment. Also, each individual should keep an eye on every action of themselves to make the environment greener and cleaner.
It cannot be denied there are still many problems that we face on a daily basis due to overpopulation. The masses are to join hands in solving problems of overpopulation as soon as possible for a better future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 217, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'issues'' or 'issue's'?
Suggestion: issues'; issue's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, moreover, really, second, so, still, therefore, well, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14869888476 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02541941146 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631970260223 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.4920482149 49.4020404114 33% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.9444444444 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9444444444 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117527430108 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308544413985 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378319473349 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674494410113 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384678062486 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.67 Out of 6
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