It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct ( dinosaurs, dodo,..). There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, conservation of endangered animal species is a topic for hot debate.
In this regard, it is proposed that the extinction of wildlife animals is basically a natural process and human beings should not be responsible for that matter. I strongly disagree with this view and will support my argument in the essay below.
First and foremost, humans are the primary contributor that pushes wildlife animals to the verge of extinction. In fact, a great number of industrial companies which manufacture customer products emit a massive amount of waste and emission to the environment, which can devastate the natural habitats and disturb the food chain of animals. Consequently, these repercussions would lead to the mass extinction of countless species. Furthermore, there is an increase in rampant poaching of wildlife animals whose bodies, such as skin or horns, are considered to cure certain diseases.Therefore, humans are held accountable and should do what is needed to rectify the situation.
Moreover, it is undeniable that animal species play a significant role which not only affect the balance of ecosystems but also human beings' lives. Everything is connected in the nuarturem, thus, disappearance of animals has a profound impact on plants and other organisms by virtue of the food chain disruption. Additionally, animal species have great aesthetic and social-cultural values. They contribute to the rich biodiversity that makes the planet a beautiful place. Most importantly, wildlife animals have a direct bearing on a myriad of cultures. For example, gows are revered and worshiped as gods in India.
In conclusion, the disappearance of wildlife animals does not occur as a natural process in the environment but as a consequence of our doings. As a strong opponent, I suggest that the government should have strict regulations and national campaigns to raise the citizens’ awareness towards the protection of wildlife animals.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 542, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...als whose bodies, such as skin or horns, are considered to cure certain diseases....
^^
Line 4, column 584, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...are considered to cure certain diseases.Therefore, humans are held accountable and should...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41233766234 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17172232119 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587662337662 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6331635707 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.133333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202683338857 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063295330851 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525170977647 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121079897523 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493546442493 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 542, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...als whose bodies, such as skin or horns, are considered to cure certain diseases....
^^
Line 4, column 584, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...are considered to cure certain diseases.Therefore, humans are held accountable and should...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41233766234 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17172232119 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587662337662 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6331635707 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.133333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202683338857 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063295330851 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525170977647 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121079897523 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493546442493 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.