With the fast pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast food for their main meals.
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, there are more and more people use fast food for their main meals. It’ll become commonly in every family in once day. For almost people, they think the advantages of fast food outweigh the disadvantages. But for me, I think the drawback is more than positive in many different ways.
Firstly, I have to talk about advantages of fast food. The most benefits of which is spend more hour doing anothers work such as go shopping, look after the children…, and we don’t take too much time to make meals. In some ways, fast food is good at living standard of families because we don’t need to cook meal; buy spices, gas, save electricity. We can reduce costs of movement. In addition, if we use more fast food, we will make jobs to somebody, it’s a kind work. Some chiefs is becoming popular and get respected. Consuming fast food help us proactive in our life, become more independent.
In others hand, there’re so much disadvantages of fast food that we can’t negate. Fast food will make people who go out to eating fast food be lazier or be dependent on another people. Most of fast food is too harmful as it have too much calo, grease. Exist some bad guy who aren’t thoroughly processing food, if we eat that food we can take stomachache, indigestible or worth is death. Moreover, we will have heart disease, cancer, or to be fat. If we always consume fast food, we can’t cook any things or show our skills of cooking to other.
Although fast food have many advantages that we can refuse. The disadvantages of fast food is over than advantages. But we can consider about the positives or negative, that should we consume fast food continuously.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...k the drawback is more than positive in many different ways. Firstly, I have to talk about a...
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Line 2, column 86, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...ast food. The most benefits of which is spend more hour doing anothers work such as g...
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Line 2, column 398, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...educe costs of movement. In addition, if we use more fast food, we will make jobs...
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Line 2, column 484, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...somebody, it’s a kind work. Some chiefs is becoming popular and get respected. Con...
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Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...dependent. In others hand, there’re so much disadvantages of fast food that we can’...
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Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
... Most of fast food is too harmful as it have too much calo, grease. Exist some bad g...
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Line 3, column 544, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...or show our skills of cooking to other. Although fast food have many advantages that we ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, i think, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6813559322 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57940487381 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559322033898 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1410562988 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.05 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338790232909 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127375480175 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106624777969 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2496969389 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101679228206 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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