Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important.
It is believed that mentality is more vital for sport success because it will influence strength of physic. However, another argument mentions vice versa.
To begin with, the physical power is essential for the sport successively due to the performance to win the competition. That is to say, when athletes have trained the body to be fit, the chance to triumph the such sport events is increasingly bigger. For instance, Indonesian trail-runner, namely Antonio Revival, won the first podium in Kinabalu Games 2020 because he has worked the leg muscle out for two years prior to the event to increase speed and stamina, jogging for 3 hours every day in sharp tracks, and this person said he would believe to have 70%-win rate.
Nevertheless, good mental is more important because of controlling the health of body. This is because, if sport professionals are mentally exhausted, they will be less motivated, impacting to suffer from several physical injuries. For instance, Malaysian swimmer, Teuku Umar, mention in TV that he was sick of swimming and wanted to pension from his career, tending to possess boredom to swim. This is caused by that this athlete did not desire to do more exercises in swimming pool, and this resulted the foot cram when he competed in this such a water game, not being able to achieve gold medal for his country.
In conclusion, it should be supported the argument that the mental is the vital of sport professionals, which the mentality is the base of body. Where possible, people occupying in sport do not only train his body, but they have to construct their positive mental also.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 266, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...have to construct their positive mental also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95604395604 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63710824984 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608058608059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.3499744569 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220608741618 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902754117277 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839060357095 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141276488711 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057100265328 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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