Task 1:The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011.
the table given compares the proportion of inhabitants who rode bicycles by age groups and genders in one town during 2011.
overall, it can be clearly seen that there were more girls and boys who used bicycles aged between 0 and 9 compared to that of other age groups. furthermore, in each group, females tend to cycle more than their counterparts throughout the mentioned period.
in the youngest age group, almost half of children used bicycles with a slight difference in the rate of two genders. these proportions had a considerable change in the 10-17 age group when the percentage of female cyclists fell to 42%, while the rate of men reduced by half ( about 24%). this downward trend went on in the group of people aged between 18 and 39, with 17% for girls and 20% for boys.
cycling was the least common in the middle age group, which had the lowest proportion of female and male bicyclists compared to other age groups (with 12 % and 8% respectively). however, these figures then rose significantly in the older group, with the former making up 19% and the latter reaching 14%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the table given compares the proportion of ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...s and genders in one town during 2011. overall, it can be clearly seen that there were...
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Line 2, column 108, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'compared' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'compares'.
Suggestion: compares
... who used bicycles aged between 0 and 9 compared to that of other age groups. furthermor...
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Line 2, column 145, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...9 compared to that of other age groups. furthermore, in each group, females tend to cycle m...
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Suggestion: In
...parts throughout the mentioned period. in the youngest age group, almost half of ...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: These
... difference in the rate of two genders. these proportions had a considerable change i...
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Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...%, while the rate of men reduced by half about 24%. this downward trend went on ...
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Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: This
...ate of men reduced by half about 24%. this downward trend went on in the group of ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Cycling
..., with 17% for girls and 20% for boys. cycling was the least common in the middle age ...
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Line 4, column 176, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...e groups with 12 % and 8% respectively. however, these figures then rose significantly ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72631578947 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53445325553 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.6788407655 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.25 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294675728718 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133848383202 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12622828992 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209618424519 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141415775082 0.0819641961636 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.