Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest?
The sedentary habits are increasingly popular in this modern and cause some health issues, even though gyms have been spread widely. To tackle this, doing daily house chores should be implemented.
To begin with, the popularity of sedentary lifestyle is inclining because of the technology development, having a tendency to suffer from diseases. That is to say, these such typical activities are compelling to do without any effort, and when persons spend time every day to perform these, the rate of illness to attack body is higher considerably. For instance, in 2019, British children had suffered from obesity due to allocating half a day to play ROBLOX, a popular and mobile game, by only sitting and snuggling in bedroom effortlessly. Nevertheless, this fun habit not only reveals the aforementioned issue, but it will cause eyesight also.
How to solve this? The viable way is to implement house works to be a light exercise as an alternative of attending gyms. This is because, if people struggle to accomplish house works, the body will move, so that it results to lose the weigh, being an easy way to be healthy. According to researchgate.com in 2020, housewife expending daily hours in order to clean living rooms had a high change to avoid the overweight issues since it burned the bad fats out by the movement of body, without sacrificing time to go out to gymnastics to receive healthy lifestyle.
In conclusion, although some fitness centers have been wide-spread, the rate of people suffering from sedentary activities grow year-to-year, then experience health problems. If people want to avoid the detrimental effect, they shall schedule more daily working out.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 643, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16058394161 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88860255515 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660583941606 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9489187225 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0917723836929 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037905652746 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043009052342 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0580761552977 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395754437727 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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