Global warming is one of the most serious issues facing the world to day. 1. What are some causes of global warming? 2. What can governments and individuals do to solve the problem?
The world is facing a global warming problem being an important issue nowadays. Some reasons become the root of the problem, which is that the government and personal people should be making some efforts to solve the case.
Firstly, the global warming problem is international issue being faced by many countries. Increasing number of vehicle being used can result air pollution and effecting to the environment, because the more amount of transportation is, the more CO2 can be generated and reduce the ozone layer in the atmosphere affecting to the planet. Therefore, the government has a necessary role to handle the problem by making a regulation controlling the transportation like limiting the public transportation or using specific terms to operate them like accepting a license to the vehicles, because the license can set the decent transportation. In addition, the government can adjust some kind of penalties if they violate the regulation.
Regarding the global warming issue, the person has a responsibility to tackle this problem such as reforestation action, because trees can produce O2 to counterbalance the air pollution being generated by a lot of factors, especially in the big city. Furthermore, saving energy by people has an important role to solve this case like reducing the operating of electronic devices in the home because energy is generated by burning materials like coal resulting CO2. For instance, people should turn off the lamp if they are not using it or they are sleeping.
To conclude, to solve the global warming problem, the government should issue a regulation related to transportation limiting the CO2 and give punishment to the people using vehicles if they do not obey the role. Lastly, the people should realize the importance of reforestation and saving energy to keep the oxygen availability in the air.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25167785235 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03872169789 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.7943737664 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.272727273 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250523096211 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11949326122 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110549676693 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182190815741 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756899850736 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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