Write about the following topic.
Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
Abortion has been a debatable topic for many years. It is argued that abortion should be legalized whilst others opine that terminating a pregnancy is not moral and should not be made legal. In my opinion, having a child or not depends on the parents' rights as they are responsible for baby's safety and health.
Many believe that discarding a pregnancy should be made illegal. Because killing a child in the mother's womb would be an act of going against God's will. No matter the stage of trimester, a life is formed from the very beginning of pregnancy. For instance, Dominic Republican is a city where government has made a law that does not support abortion irrespective of financial and mental condition of the mother. I would disagree with this view because a mother is connected to the baby from the commencement of permanency. Such conditions would not only hamper the health of the female but also the baby.
Conversely, there are others who would agree that terminating a pregnancy should be made legal. Women know better whether they can raise a child or not. Moreover, pregnancy can also be a result of rape victims or unwanted marriage. In such cases, women are forced to have intercourse and hence are not physically or emotionally ready to bear a child. For instance, US government legalized abortion cases which resulted in 90 percent decline of women's depression cases. Therefore, undergoing abortion should be a fundamental right of the women.
To summarize, whether to make abortion legal or illegal is a controversial subject ; in my opinion women should be given the authority to stop the pregnancy by making abortion legal because if the conditions of raising a child is unfavourable, it is better to take necessary actions as early as possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ing a pregnancy should be made illegal. Because killing a child in the mothers womb wou...
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Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'mothers'' or 'mother's'?
Suggestion: mothers'; mother's
...illegal. Because killing a child in the mothers womb would be an act of going against G...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95302013423 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82238185019 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557046979866 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5045070379 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.25 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208466322705 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704417093038 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626798734575 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144830570753 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576653045023 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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