Write an essay about the advantages and disadvantages of online learning.
Presently, all over the world is coping with the worst pandemic ever caused by novel coronavirus which damages the lungs and respiration system leading to severe pneumonia. As a result, human’s lives have been changed dramatically in every facet, especially in education, playing a vital function in the world today. Students no longer have a chance to attend chalkboard classrooms, and this situation leads to the emergence of online learning as a temporary alternative which contains not only fantastic merits but also a wide variety of drawbacks.
On the one hand, with online education, pupils save a lot of time. Students spend an average of about 2 hours a day commuting to the campus, plus the time waiting for lecturers and other students, obviously wasting the valuable period of time to do other beneficial activities such as reading books or doing exercises. Additionally, they have to invest another long period of their leisure time on relaxing to get back the energy after finishing school, which is indeed time-consuming. Besides that advantage, online courses give students full control over their own learning. They are able to move faster through areas of the course they are comfortable with, but slower through those that they need a little more time on. Online learning apparently lets pupils have more time to explore both their inner and outer world.
On the other hand, students who want to acquire knowledge effectively via technological tools have to be self-motivated and self-disciplined. The transformation from physical class to online class needs the power of good manners and a lot of effort. It requires them to set deadlines, make use of time-management skills and be really strict to themselves. In addition, they have to be curious, and hunger to find the perfect answers for hard questions. Humans need to be satisfied with what they are doing to keep them inspired. Besides that, they have to be clever enough to filter the information they access on the Internet. They need to know whether that information is true or not. If they can deal with these disadvantages, search engines will be their trusted and best teacher ever.
Everything in this world has its own pros and cons, and the mission of humans is to take advantage of the good side and avoid the bad one. Students can benefit a lot from online learning such as saving time or adjusting their own learning speed depending on their ability. However, they need to get rid of the disadvantages such as having to be self-disciplined and be calm amid mind-blowing sources of information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...g with the worst pandemic ever caused by novel coronavirus which damages the lung...
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... but also a wide variety of drawbacks. On the one hand, with online education, ...
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...tudents, obviously wasting the valuable period of time to do other beneficial activities such ...
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...lore both their inner and outer world. On the other hand, students who want to ...
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...e their trusted and best teacher ever. Everything in this world has its own pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, however, if, really, so, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2166.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 429.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04895104895 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88670523059 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578088578089 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9815271301 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.3 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.45 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110318231085 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317636455353 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397623891117 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714631636684 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456870512137 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.