In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way.
Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In every industry, enterprises often follow the tendency to exaggerate the advantages of their products, striving to prove their difference to others on the market. Some conceivable factors are leading to this trend, though the benefits resulting from the circumstance are numerous, on the behave of a customer, I consider this to have brought more negative effects. To begin with, the method to overstate the products as the means of marketing carried out by companies these days is mainly due to the competition with other enterprises. As society develops, the number of items on the market is overwhelming and the competition in the industries to boost sales has become more and more harsh, resulting in the behavior of most companies, which is overstating their products to gain attention from customers. It is noticeable that on every mass media, regarding medical treatments, people are familiar with their advertisement billboards spotlighting the instant benefits, which bring out eye-catching effects to interested people. As a result, to not be left behind, all companies started to follow this trend, making its appearance attached to every aspect of daily life. This circumstance, however, has led to some thorny issues, especially to purchasers, with the most noticeable influences being the advantages for the customers as the downturn in products' quality occurred. Since most companies are focusing on the marketing strategy and not the innovation of the goods, the negative results affect directly consumers, namely their health and their financial status, regarding the picture of confusing customers in such a chaotic market and the high risks of purchasing low-quality products. In such circumstances, because of the short-term benefits, these companies have made their reputation worse, leading the whole industries to go downturn, as well as deterring the development of society. In conclusion, due to the high-speed pace of society development, enterprises these days often focus on the financial benefits that they carry out overstated advertisements about their products. This, in turn, has rather affected poorly on the customers and the industries, as well as the innovation of the whole society in the long-term future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 287, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... from the circumstance are numerous, on the behave of a customer, I consider this to have ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47550432277 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04838114866 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536023054755 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.7248628301 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.727272727 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5454545455 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186847829521 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705021953497 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297978959033 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186847829521 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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