Some people believe that it is a good idea that older people continue to work if it is possible for them to do. Do you agree or disagree
In this day and age, one nation must necessitate the workforce supplement in order to sustain the economic growth. However, there are numerous countries whose workers are suffering from the aging process. To tackle this problem, many suggest increasing the retirement age and allow these people to work provided that their state is completely healthy. In my opinion, I partly agree with this idea and several rationales will be discussed to support my point.
On the one hand, an aging workforce is unable to secure productivity. That is to say the old people usually suffer from several health problems such as diabetes or Alzheimer's disease which is not suitable for the extremities and labour intensity. For example, craftsmen with eye disease are not capable of performing precise work which leads to the deduction in products. In total, making old people continue to work can make the economy suffer from the loss of product's quality and quantity.
On the other hand, working contributes to the development of a healthy and happy downhill period. Cognitive tasks are proof to boost memory capacity and improve logical thinking. In addition, the co-workers environment which involves social contact helps old people to stay away from solitude and attain mental health. Having a look at language-related jobs, old people specialising in this major are often neglected by health problems and they have the tendency to achieve an enjoyable life among others. Therefore, expanding the retirement age, in the long term, will improve human longevity and provide more experienced workers in different majors.
To conclude, allowing old people to continue working is an efficient method to keep them healthy even though chances are the total productivity of the nation's economy will decrease. In my opinion, to apply this measure in a practical situation, governments must consult in many aspects such as laboriousness in order to help old people have a better life.
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Suggestion: nations'; nation's
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Suggestion:
...to help old people have a better life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, therefore, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25396825397 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75936756295 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.716330003 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157640285511 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494141085189 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434550977052 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999962643476 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312676148476 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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