Write a letter to your manager asking for a training course, which you would like to attend.
letter explain
• What the course is,
• Why it is required for your job,
• How you will manage work while the course
Dear Mrs.Lisa,
I am writing to ask you about a training course that I would like to attend for improving my competence. Last week, I found a website specializing in Marketing so I realize that this training course is so great and useful. It is called Smart Marketing Strategy consists of planning advertising projects, how to attract customers, and analyzing trends related to the marketing industry to find out the demand of customers. The training course really brings many benefits for me. My job requirement needs to catch up with trends and create varied plans for the type of customers so I realize that course is a good choice for my work. Not only provides a lot of information, tips but it also helps me enhance my qualification and skills to meet the requests of my job. Besides, the training course has three days in a week: Monday, Thursday and Friday and ends in two weeks; therefore, I can manage my work by means of focusing on my main schedule and delaying a few tasks. I believe that I will arrange my assignments appropriately and send you a particular schedule.
I hope that you will accept my offer. I am looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible.
Sincerely yours,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Lisa
Dear Mrs.Lisa, I am writing to ask you about a tra...
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Line 3, column 1067, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ely and send you a particular schedule. I hope that you will accept my offer. I ...
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Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... I hope that you will accept my offer. I am looking forward to receiving your re...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7358490566 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80572762605 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63679245283 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2366036046 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301412691724 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105435563521 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901943771775 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198126601703 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857900488739 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.